Page 8.
I'm not so sure I like the flow on this page.
I try to set up anticipation for the following page with something sort of dynamic and/or suspenseful in the final panel of the previous page. While we see the the TYR ground commander shielding his eyes from some intense glow I have to imagine the reader would just think it's the radient glow given off by Spawn in the previous panel. As such it doesn't lend itself very well to anticipating the big bang that leads off page nine...
That and I've been very unhappy with the way the panels with the smaller drawing elements have turned out - the drawings seem soooooo weak to me.
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